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The 5 Year Journal
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Let's Write A
Cinquain!
By Kim Hoelzli
Poetry is a wonderful way to express an idea. If writing a story is like
making a movie with words, writing poetry is like taking a picture of one
thing in your life.
Originally, Cinquains were a five-line stanza found in a poem. Now, a
Cinquain is a five-line poem in itself, although, several Cinquains can
still be joined to make a longer poem.
A Word Cinquain
A word Cinquain is the easiest form to start with. The first line is made
up of one word, usually a noun that tells the reader what the poem is
about. I'll choose the word "dog." The second line is two adjectives
describing the dog:
Dog
Friendly, loyal
The third line is three words expressing action:
Dog
Friendly, loyal
Watching, listening, attending
I want my poem to be a whole unit rather than just five lines of words. To
do this, I have chosen three action words that describe what the dog does
making her loyal and friendly. The dog watches her master, she listens to
her master and she attends, or does what the master instructs.
The fourth line of the poem is made up of a four-word phrase summing up
the ideas of the first three lines:
Dog
Friendly, loyal
Watching, listening, attending
Always a faithful companion
The last line of the poem is one word again. It should be a synonym of the
first word. The first word and the last word of the poem should be
interchangeable without changing the meaning of the poem.
Dog
Friendly, loyal
Watching, listening, attending
Always a faithful companion
Jezebel
I chose my dog's name for the last line. If I put "Jezebel" in the
first line and "dog" in the last line, the poem still means the same
thing. Everyone knows that I'm talking about my faithful dog, Jezebel.
I chose to put Jezebel's name last instead of the word "dog" because of
the shape of the poem. If you look at the poem, it starts out very narrow,
it widens out and the last line becomes suddenly narrow again. I wanted
the shape of the poem to be reflected in the words. To do this, I narrowed
the poem's meaning. That is, I've taken the poem from being about a dog,
any dog, to being about a faithful friend (which may or may not be a
dog-the widening shape allows you to widen the meaning) to being about my
dog specifically. This narrows the idea of a dog down to the most personal
level there is.
If you want to have some fun making some silly Cinquains, try the Cinquain
maker at:
http://www.eduplace.com/tales/c/cinquains.html It tells you what to
enter and then writes a Cinquain for you. The resulting Cinquains don't
always make complete sense, but they are good for a giggle.
Then try writing a Cinquain yourself. Look around you for an object that
you like, or even one you don't like. A Cinquain can be a very powerful
way to express your disgust about something. Follow the pattern and write.
If you don't like the first poem you write, write a second poem. Writing
poetry is like any other skill you learn. You must practice it to become
good at it. So start writing, and keep writing.
About the author
Kim Hoelzli is a university student and writer living with her husband and
two sons in small town Ontario. She is the author of a juvenile novel,
articles on literacy, and children’s book reviews. Kim has conducted
workshops for parents and daycare providers on literacy issues. She has
been previously published in Real Kids! Magazine. |
| Formatting
Your Manuscript
By Linda S. Dupie
Formatting a manuscript (your story or article) for publication is an
important step to getting it noticed by an editor. A properly formatted
article makes it easier to read and helps when formatting an online
publication. We’ll cover formatting email and paper submissions.
Email submissions are single-spaced with a double space between
paragraphs. To keep your paragraphs formatted correctly you should use a
program like Notepad without word wrap to paste into the email. If you
copy and paste directly from your word processing program your formatting
may turn out like this-
Example-
Formatting a manuscript (your story
or article) for publication is an important step
to getting it noticed by an editor. Submitting
properly
formatted makes your article/story
easier to read and helps when formatting an online publication.
Working with a text program like Notepad is easy and helps you put your
best formatting foot forward. Each of your paragraphs in this program will
look like continuous sentences.
Example- you have five paragraphs in your article, in Notepad these
paragraphs will look like five separate sentences.
Copy and paste your article/story from this application into the body
of the email and you’ll have five properly formatted paragraphs.
Paper Manuscripts
Formatting paper manuscripts has never been easier than with your computer
and favorite word processing program. Your first step in formatting begins
with your name; complete address, telephone number, and email address if
you have one. This information belongs at the top left-hand corner and is
single-spaced. In the top right hand corner, you should place the word
count of your story or article. It is also best to use the Courier font in
a size 12.
Next, you’ll center your title in all capital letters half way down the
page. Then space down five more spaces and begin typing your story. Your
manuscript should be double-spaced unless the publication guidelines
specify differently.
Another step in formatting is to make sure each page after the first
identifies the manuscript as yours. At the top of the page, you will type
your last name, the title or part of it and the page number. This helps if
your pages get separated.
Lastly, you’ll want to be sure you have a one to one and one half-inch
margin on the sides, top and bottom of each page. Most word processing
programs today are defaulted to this and you won’t have to worry.
Your manuscript is now ready for submission whether you’re sending an
email or using postal mail.
Copyright 2001, by Linda S. Dupie |
| CHILDREN'S POETRY FORM
WORKSHOP :
Shape Poems/Lantern
(c) 2001 Lynne Remick
With a little imagination, the "Lantern Poem" will end up in a shape that
somewhat looks like a lantern. Of course, it will look more or less like a
lantern depending on the length of the words that you choose.
This poetry form is fun to do, but can also be challenging, as the first
line and the last line must be strong words--and you can only use one for
each line!
Here are the requirements for the Lantern poem.
Use a one-word title as the 1st line.
Two words form 2nd line.
Three words form the 3rd line.
Four words form the 4th line.
One word sums up the poem and forms the 5th line.
Example:
Nightlight
Aurora Borealis
Dances merrily against
An arctic tundra backdrop--
Illumination.
For those of you who don't know what the Aurora Borealis is, they are the
colored lights that dance against the sky in the Arctic Circle. The closer
you are to the North Pole, the better you can see them.
Illumination means "lit up."
Now, it's your turn.
Have fun!
Author Bio-Lynne Remick is a freelance children's writer. She is the "So
You Want to be a Children's Writer" Columnist for The Writer's Exchange,
and the Writing for Kids Tips Guru at http://www.writingforkids-tips.com
(Coming February 2001). In addition, Lynne is the editor for http://www.topica.com/lists/Lil_Scribbles/
and the moderator of http://www.topica.com/lists/Lil_Scribblers/
Discussion List. |
| Keeping
Track
By Linda S. Dupie
Recently a young writer asked me how I keep track of my submissions, this
is something I hadn't thought about often, but something I do day after
day.
There are as many ways to track your submissions, as there are writers,
for simplicity we'll look at three of the most common systems I have found
while talking to writers. Some writers use their computers, others use
index cards, notebooks, and some write the information on the files they
keep for each project. Others use all of the above.
Whatever system you choose, make it work for you. When I first began, I
was terrible about writing down where I sent my work. I thought I could
keep it straight in my head. In the beginning, I tried every way but what
worked best for me. I am a detail-oriented person, I like to have
information available wherever I am, and I like it to be portable. I like
to use file folders; I have a file for the project and a file for the
publication. When I finish a project and choose a market I write that
market on the front of the project file with the date submitted and the
editor. I also place a copy of the manuscript and cover letter in that
file. For the Publication file I place the writer’s guidelines and a copy
of the cover letter in the file, and write the title of the project and
date submitted to the publication on this file too. This system makes it
easy to see what I have submitted, whether I look at the publication or
project file. This system works well in the office or home but is not very
potable. For portability, I use a notebook and index cards.
Organizing A Submission Notebook
I know many writers who use this inexpensive and portable way to track
their submissions. The most common set up I have seen is the seven-column
format. For example, your columns may look like this:
[Title][Magazine Publisher/Editor][Word Count][Date sent][Date
Returned][Published][Pay Date/Amount]
As you send out each project fill in the appropriate columns, and as you
hear from the publications fill in your open columns.
Using Index Cards
Index cards are as simple to use as the notebook. One advantage to index
cards over the notebook is your ability to reorganize them. If you were to
look in my box of index cards, you would see five categories:
1. Project (Index card used)
2. Publication (Index card used)
3. Outstanding Submissions
4. Ready To Submit
5. Published
I use two index cards similar to the way I use file folders. On one index
card, I write the project name with word count, publication name, editor
and date sent. On the second card, I write the publication name, contact
information, and the title of the project and date sent. I keep the
publication cards in alphabetical order at the back of the box. Then I
have a section for Outstanding Submissions also in alphabetical order; as
I receive responses I either move the cards to the Published category or
to the Ready To Be Sent category. For a simpler approach to this system
freelance writer Carol Sjostrom Miller does this, "When I finish a piece,
I write the title on an index card. On the back of the card, I list
possible markets for the piece. Then when I'm ready to submit, I write the
magazine I submitted to and the date on the front of the card. If I get a
rejection, I just cross off the market and put the next one beneath it,
and keep going until it gets accepted…I just file the cards alphabetically
by title."
Using Your Computer
If you do the majority of your writing at the computer this may be the
best and easiest way to track submissions. Using a database program like
Access or your word processor with a table inserted allows room for more
information and cross-referencing.
A database program like Access allows you to add columns that your
notebook doesn't have the room for such as the address of the publication
and the time you spend on the project. You also have the ability to
cross-reference your work. For example, you have the publication entered
into the system you can cross reference the manuscript to the publisher to
eliminate entering your information twice.
There is no one right way to track your submissions, be as detailed as you
want. The key is to find the system that best suits your needs.
Copyright 2001, by Linda S. Dupie. All rights reserved.
Author Bio-Linda is a mother, wife and writer. She writes on many topics
including writing, parenting and travel. Visit her home page at
http://www.lindasdupie.com |
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WRITER’S KIT
By Angie Ledbetter
You’ll need several tools to help you to become a good writer – paper and
pen (duh!), dictionary, thesaurus, and if possible, a computer to help
make your writing projects easier to work with and correct. There’s one
more item to keep in your writer’s box that are often not thought about
until they are needed. Ideas!
The writing instruments are pretty easy to come by, but sometimes we all
get stuck with the idea part. We stare at a blank page or screen and the
ideas seem to be frozen in our heads. There are ideas and topics
everywhere if you keep your eyes open and do not become bogged down in
thinking that your idea has to be some super fantastic, never before
written about subject. Concentrate on what you spend your days doing and
soon the ideas will begin to flow. To help you get started; here are a few
suggestions for finding good writing topics:
What are YOU interested in reading about? Realizing that a subject holds
your interest is a key to successful writing. If you enjoy something, it
makes sense that others will too. Think about your interests and
activities, and how you could present information about those things to
readers. Do you know a coach or teacher with a great way of teaching
others? Is there a new club you’ve joined or would like to get started at
school? What about that book series you are hooked into, or your favorite
band? Pick an idea and start writing about it as if you are writing to a
close friend who knows very little about your subject. You can also do
music, movie, or book reviews.
Listen to others. Many good stories and essays have come from writers who
pay attention to what other people are talking about. You don’t have to be
a snoop, you just have to have good listening skills.
Keep notes of your ideas and thoughts. Always carry a notebook with you so
you won’t have to try to remember that great idea you had for a story at
baseball practice or in English class. Whenever you are stumped for a
writing subject, whip open your writing notebook and just choose a subject
at random. Try comparing and contrasting your idea with another similar
idea for an interesting essay. (Why is such and such better or more
interesting than so and so?)
Let your imagination run wild. Start writing a fantasy story without an
outline. Just let your words flow out without trying to make them fit into
a structure. Don’t worry about whether it’s making sense or not. You can
always go back later and edit or change it, and you may end up with a few
good story starters.
Use a story, article, essay, or poem that someone else has written as an
idea starter. See if you can write something similar that is more
interesting, funny, or intense.
If you want to be a good writer, you will have to read a lot. Pick up
magazines and see what other writers are writing about. Make notes in your
notebook for ideas that you find, or that come to you when reading.
These are just a few ways you can come up with things to write about.
Ideas are everywhere around you every second of the day. Don’t wait to be
struck by lightening, just pick up your pen and start writing about what
you see, smell, hear, feel, like, dislike, wish for, or think. Your
writing ideas are only limited by the size of your imagination!
Angie Ledbetter © 2001
Angie is a regular contributor to Southern Renaissance and the Island Park
News, an award winning publication in Island Park, Idaho, and
editor/columnist of its Fertile Ground section. She is a member of the
Louisiana Press Women and NFPW. Her column, "Catholic Community" runs in
the Ascension Citizen newspaper. Angie writes poetry, fiction, book
reviews for
www.writers-exchange.com and nonfiction for the Internet, and
balances freelancing with 2 part time jobs, the activities of 3 young
children, ministry work, and scouting. Angie is part of a team creating a
four-volume inspirational series, Fertile Ground Seasons. For more
information, go to
http://www.fertilegroundseasons.com. |
| How to
Write a Five Part School Essay using the Rule of Three
By Margaret Byers Smith, Ph. D.
You want to know how to get a good grade when writing a paper for
History or English or anything else? Well, surprisingly enough the best
method to use is also the most easiest. How cool is that? This method,
the writing formula that is most likely to get you a good grade, is The
Five Paragraph Essay that uses The Rule of Three. You can vary this, of
course, but the formula is a sure winner so I am going to use it right
here in this letter to show you how! Here goes: To start off, the most
simple, yet highly compelling, way to write an academic essay, is to have
the first paragraph be the Introduction. Then you have the next three
paragraphs act as the Body of the paper. Finally, you have a fifth
paragraph that is the Summary and/or Conclusion. Those last three
sentences written here about the three parts of the essay could be
combined into one sentence which you would call the Thesis for this paper
and they finish up the Introduction Paragraph.
The Body of your paper probably will have many facts or points or
arguments. But to make sure the paper is simple enough that your reader
notices each of these items, the body of the paper should be organized
into at least three paragraphs. A longer paper may use five paragraphs or
even have sections with three to five paragraphs. But to be powerful,
each paragraph, such as this one, should have at least three points to
sound like full paragraph.
Oddly enough, the paragraphs in the Body, as opposed to the Introduction,
should start with a Topic Sentence instead of ending with a Thesis
Sentence. The topic sentence in each paragraph should be broad enough to
cover three points. In a history paper, for example, you might be listing
three names or explaining three dates which you have suggested would be
covered right there in that first sentence--the topic sentence. It is
easy to see that these three points might be covered in three sentences
but sometimes it would take more than three and other times could be
stated in just one.
The paragraphs in the Body, following the Rule of Three, need to sound
like they go together or that they naturally follow one another or that
they build up to the conclusion.
It is easy to conclude the reasons whys the Five Paragraph Paper usually
get a good grade. Mostly, the five paragraphs are easy to read, easy to
follow, and most clearly show that you have used reasoning and
organization. Besides that, the rule of Three works because most
generally one reason is not very convincing in a paper, or even a
paragraph. Also, over three or five points in a paragraph or even a
section of a longer paper can be very confusing unless these, too, are
broken down into an understandable three. Thus, most papers that get the
coveted "A," or a "Well Written" remark will all follow the same writing
formula--Five Paragraphs or Parts using The Rule of Three.
Margaret Byers Smith, Ph. D., Writer, Retired Social Psychologist
http://members.aol.com/historyresearch
Bengeserit@aol.com |
| IDEAS
ESCAPE ME
By
Linda S. Dupie
Have you ever said, "I have nothing to write about." It's just not true;
you have plenty look around. Everywhere you go, everywhere you look there
are hundreds of ideas. You have to open your eyes and mind and let them
in.
Before you say that ideas been done, let me say this, its been covered
probably a hundred times over but what makes it original is your slant on
the topic. If writers were to avoid ideas because they have been covered
the written world, movies and books would cease to exist because there
wouldn't be a need for writers.
No matter what your age, open your eyes and mind, absorb your
surroundings, and then write.
10 PLACES TO FIND IDEAS
1. Playgrounds are great to jog your memory of events that would make
excellent essays, plots for short stories or articles.
2. Libraries-There is literally thousands of ideas at your fingertips
here. You could write book reviews. Write a rebuttal to an article you
don't agree with.
3. School/College-Why not write a survival guide article. How to survive
the eight grade, how you completed your first year of college without
gaining the 'Freshman 15'. A how to article is perfect for magazines that
target your peers.
4. Pets-How to articles. For example, you convinced your parents to let
you have a pet; you have what you need to write a how to for other kids
based on your experiences. Be serious or funny whatever works for you.
5. Your community-Has a peer or adult accomplished something extraordinary
or ordinary that benefited other? Interview them for a profile piece.
6. Trends/Fads- As a kid or teen you're in a unique position of spotting a
trend before it really happens. Look around at your peers, what are they
wearing? How are they talking? Did a friend just return from Europe? Did
they bring back anything that might become trendy here? Write about it!
7. Television-Write about the reality shows from your point of view. What
do you really think of them? Your perspective will vary greatly from that
of an adult.
8. Grocery stores-This is a great place to observe people and gather
traits for characters in your short stories. You could write a humorous
essay comparing your shopping list with that of your parents.
9. Hobbies-Do you have a unique hobby? Write about it and share your
expertise with others.
10. Politics-You're never too young! Is something happening locally, state
or nationally that affects you and your peers?
Dig around, make some calls and try to talk with the individual or
individuals involved to help you understand and then write about it to
help others understand.
Ideas are everywhere, just look around, and you'll never say I have
nothing to write about again. |
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